Master piece update

a sneak peak of what is to come. The audio might be a little loud, i tried to add music to this video but i dont have a video editor on my computer so if you want the full experience open a new tab and add this URL:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J6ZWlDks0nQ      then close the sound of my video and overlap the two :P please comment and let me know what you guys think! It would really help me out